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virgin within
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:38:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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im so tired of you judging
tired of your eyes looking at me
tired with your tuts
i know im not perfect
but who is?
my young skin touched in every place
my virginity lost
my body tarnished
hands all over
i can feel them
even though there not there
i scrub away the dirt and thilf
only for it to stay
after my skin is raw and bleeding
my tiny sins scarred all over me
my secrets spread
eyes that follow me around wherever i run
in the dark i can hear the voices
those nasty comments
save them,i already know
dont you think i hate myself enough
but a light shines
the virgin within speaks to me
i ignore her words of peace and hope
and carry on abusing myself
i bleed
the cause of too much
my body in pain
iam too young to experience what i have
but i open up to easily
and once again there inside
messing up my body
my once so smooth skin
is ruff and prickily
i have tasted poisoned pleasure
only fourteen years of life
and i cant wait for it to end
the virgin within i realise
...has died
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Re: virgin within
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:40:55 PM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE. I LIKE THE WAY YOU EXPRESS YOURSELF. |
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Re: virgin within
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by CrippinBabi513 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:00:12 PM AEST
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| I LOST MI VIRGINITY WEN I WAS 11 YRS OLD. TURST ME I NO WUT ITS LIKE TO BE JUDGED... DONT LET PEOPLE GET UNDA YO SKIN BY WUT THEY SAY CUZ THEY AINT PERFECT...KEEP WRITTIN |
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Re: virgin within
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:13:23 PM AEST
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This is sad... to be honest, it is really no ones buisness, just ignore them.
The only problem with this, I saw, is that you need some capitals.
Great write though,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: virgin within
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by b_rand on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:48:16 PM AEST
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i scrub away the dirt and thilf
only for it to stay
after my skin is raw and bleeding
my tiny sins scarred all over me
this is one of the best few lines I've read in a long long time. fantastic job, and don't worry about what other people think. only .0001% of the people you know (your direct family) now will matter a couple years down the line |
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Re: virgin within
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by disturbed_silence on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:20:22 PM AEST
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great poem. You wrote that you realize you've made mistakes,well that's good enough,anyway to hell with what people think, is your life not theirs, they should shut their mouth and look at their own defects.
xoxoxoxox thais |
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