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The Resurrection Chamber
Contributed by
Urizen
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:58:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I see myself in the shards of glass that litter the floor,
There are no memories left,
Just a feeling that I should know more,
Maybe it's better if I don't see you, that I don't know the truth,
I'll never know your answer but I'll never know what it's like to lose.
The bottle's empty and my glass has run dry,
I'm too tired to function, I'm too tired to even try,
From the window I watch the mist appear,
Rolling in isometric circles, through a distant atmosphere,
Lady,Lady I think of you,
The smiles you give
The way your hair moves,
I wonder and shudder and start to fall
I don't know you,
I don't know you at all.
Wrapped up in dreams
My actions are real
The feel of your lips
Opened wounds start to heal.
But it's only a vision
A wish on a star,
A thought in my mind
A thought gone too far
The future kicks in with a shout and a bang,
You're a scar on my arm,
You're the knife in my hand,
You're the flow of blood,
You're the hatred and the pain,
You're the hole in my life,
You're the fine summer rain.
I close my heart and I try to forget,
What it feels like to love without any regrets,
But I always end up in this dark, lonely place
With a toast to the past, it begins again.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2005-03-21 16:58:53]
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Re: The Resurrection Chamber
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:04:52 PM AEST
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This is rather unique. I kinda like it, it's different.
It confuses in me in certain places though, as it seems you go off at a tangent and write further than you mean to.
Still great write, I think the first verse is the best.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: The Resurrection Chamber
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by EmoKiss on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:13:48 PM AEST
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| This is great. It's kind of mystical. . .in a away, because you think you understand what it's about, and then it changes. . .I like it alot. Way to write! :D |
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