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Skin poem
Contributed by
crickle
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:18:38 PM in AEST
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I cut this skin across my veins.
I cut this skin to release these pains.
The pain thats not just on the skin.
But the pain that lies deep within.
Cut me deep, deeper inside
For there youll find the pain I hide.
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crickle
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2005-03-21 18:18:38]
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Re: Skin poem
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 07:05:58 PM AEST
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you said alot without a huge poem I hope things work out for you I dont understand the cutting thing well so I cant really comment on that
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Re: Skin poem
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by moon_light on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:35:35 PM AEST
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i have reasontly gone thrue the same tink a few weeks ago. now all is fine but, i still have the marks on my arm. i use excuses to cover for it. that is how it feals so good wright.
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Re: Skin poem
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by Spike on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 09:49:36 PM AEST
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I've worked a lot with people who cut themselves and your poem simply and beautifully touched on a key element common to them all - the need to cut as the only adequate way to express and release the deep inner pain.
A strong, stand alone stanza.
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