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Burning Love
Contributed by
secretwind
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:04:58 PM in AEST
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How could you do this to me
tear apart my heart
make me cry and beg
and just turn and leave,
I thought that our love was true
but ever since you said
you no longer love me
I don't know what to believe,
I feel so abused
seems like I always lose
left alone
as I emotionally bleed
I never thought you'd do this to me.
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secretwind
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2005-03-21 22:04:58]
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Re: Burning Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Moshi_Moshi on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:08:01 PM AEST
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| It was short but it was good. Great job and keep it up! |
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Re: Burning Love
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:49:46 PM AEST
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| excellent poem. i rather liked the fast pace of it. people either assume or dont think, and its either the wrong assumption or the thing never thought that happens. |
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