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Death (1)
Contributed by
drake666
on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:14:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Light and darkness in the sky
love alone in my eye
sleep tonight by my love
to wake up looking high above
Eternity down in night
living hell a pound the light
to stare up on that girl
that took me to this endless pearl
Copyright ©
drake666
... [
2005-03-21 22:14:05]
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Re: Death (1)
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:46:13 PM AEST
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The first stanza is cool billy the second makes no sences....
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Re: Death (1)
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by greeneyes on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:59:15 PM AEST
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Not bad for your first one. Welcome!
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Re: Death (1)
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:49:06 PM AEST
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I thought this was very good indeed.
great job
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Re: Death (1)
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 12:21:36 PM AEST
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This is really good. I like it.. Welcome to YPDC..
take care
christina |
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