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What Can I Do?
Contributed by
ell_03
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:34:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The people around,
Are closing in,
I just can't breathe,
I just can't win.
I'm so confused,
Life is too much,
What can I do,
I hate having to rush.
People think of suicide,
But of death I am too scared,
I never could go through with it,
Even if nobody cared.
It seems like I'm all alone,
I've nowhere to go,
I feel like I'm no good,
For I have nothing to show.
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ell_03
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2005-03-21 22:34:01]
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Re: What Can I Do?
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:48:10 AM AEST
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very nice...not bad on rhyming, good forum...i like the first part
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Re: What Can I Do?
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by JGB on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 09:00:59 PM AEST
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publishing material, I would have to say yes, but yet i don't know for sure. I am wondering about mine. I will publish my own anyway one way or the other.
about u'r poem, u are not alone, i know that for sure. many have felt the very same way and putting u'r thoughts down in writing is just what writing poetry is all about.
lol
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