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Emotion Climax
Contributed by
TinkerHell
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:31:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A new surrounding
my heart is pounding
vision focuses clear
one of my biggest fears
what will they think
with my face turning pink?
My words start stuttering
what are they muttering?
Senses awakening
hands are shaking
I'm going to burst
this feeling is the worst
the beat still pacing
my mind, it's racing
they are one...
but I am NONE.
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2005-03-21 23:31:05]
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Re: Emotion Climax
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:44:02 AM AEST
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Good writing.
They can mean many things so I won't say I like or dis like this as it leaves it open for the reader to disciper which is a good thing.
for that reason I call it a masterpeice as we all learn from who we read.
Awesaome!
huggs,
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