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Gimpd
Contributed by
gimpie
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 01:30:03 AM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Tears of red Blood runs thin Anger rises Here we go again, Doors slam shut Holes in walls Life's too much I start to fall, People fight Who should be kool I see **** crumble And feel the fool, I hate to cry I hate to bleed But sometimes both Are meant to be, The blackest sky The deepest red Both seen and felt Within my head, What I want And what I see Pain immense Just set it free, Let it rain And let it die Water washes Tears now dry.
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Re: Gimpd
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 01:35:32 AM AEST (User
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Such a masterpeice!
I have no clue who ur but you've written a truth so bold that it will live in history long after we leave this planet.
It's sortta written like the parables of old which to me are jus leaving wisdom for the genreration to come as well as the present.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Gimpd
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 11:51:05 AM AEST (User
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Gimpie
You are unreal so talented.Bless you. You have so much to offer.I have to take time and read one more before I go on to comment on someone else.Post more.
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