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The End
Contributed by
putteragain
on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:17:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Water dark green and slimy
foul stench drifts upward to the lazy city
sleeping souls fear no danger
what awaits the day
waking eyes catch first glimps
of some vile mist of vapor
reaching out to open shades
they belive not what they see
slowly rolling this dark cloud
will take them one by one
no where to run to hide
the end has come for them
stiffled cries from every window
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putteragain
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2005-03-22 12:17:21]
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Re: The End
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:24:35 PM AEST
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I think the length of it is good :) well expressed and dark, great poem
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