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A Woman's Beauty
Contributed by
Sensei
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 01:29:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In the eyes of man, the beauty of a woman turns all else to dust
Weaving like magic a spell that clouds the mind.
It closes the mouth that would speak the truth,
And stays the words that would touch the heart
Struck dumb he watches her graceful passing
As a statue bereft of thought or deed.
And on she goes in sorrow, lost in her thoughts
Unloved, untouched, by word or deed.
Copyright ©
Sensei
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2005-03-22 13:29:41]
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Re: A Woman's Beauty
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by bigtig6269 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:42:00 PM AEST
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| so true so true. It's hard to put into words how a woman's beauty is, but you did a good job. Keep it up |
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Re: A Woman's Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 03:55:18 PM AEST
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I thought this was a really meaningul write. Thanks for sharing this.
How true.
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Re: A Woman's Beauty
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by DanishPoet on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:23:22 PM AEST
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Thanks for writing what we others only can think.
Yet another good work.
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Re: A Woman's Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:29:56 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and so powerful. There's so much behind this. I really enjoyed it. |
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Re: A Woman's Beauty
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:29:10 AM AEST
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I pondered your poem. Firstly let me say it is a real gem, magnificent.
Secondly, I don't think women in general see their own beauty. But you have given a glimpse.
High praise for this one.
Kie |
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