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SEEKERES
Contributed by
enamat
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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Theres blackness in the sky
Theres a hole in the moon
Theres a story behind this
Theres a dawn rising soon.
Tale is about endless space, blinding lights,
burning stars, planet fights.
This one is for real
Its for those who suffer still
Its for those who look ahead
Who are wise but not speaking
Who are silent but not dead.
There are those who fight their cause
Some are searching for lost skies,
matching souls, winding roads, open doors.
They will go against the odds,
rise high mighty swards,
feel the thrill of final chase
dark forces they will face.
It begins:
fatal quest for missing light,
everlasting fight with night.
There are seekers everywhere
fighting their own wars,
falling, waning battles, losing lives
comets running through their minds.
Seekers time cant be measured
Never will they live in pleasure
Bloody fights are in their hearts.
Copyright ©
enamat
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2005-03-22 14:10:13]
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Re: SEEKERES
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:18:26 PM AEST
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| this is a very good piece - very different from a lot of work posted., well done! |
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Re: SEEKERES
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by b_rand on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:44:15 PM AEST
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Incredibly original. I really enjoyed reading this. Great job. I especially liked the lines:
It’s for those who suffer still
It’s for those who look ahead
Who are wise but not speaking
Who are silent but not dead.
extremely thought-provoking |
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