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The Night I Tried To KILL Myself....
Contributed by
concrete_rose
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:05:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The night i tried to kill myself, i wanted to be free, free from hell upon this earth, free from agony.
Free from all the stress and pain and sorrows underneath, no one seems to notice that i go through so much grief.
The night i tried to kill myself, I felt I had no purpose, without someone to hear my cries, I felt so cheap and worthless.
Have you ever felt this way? not wanting to live? But if I took away my life, could GOD ever forgive?
Will I go to heaven even though I chose to fail? They say that when you take your life is when you'll burn in hell.
The night I tried to kill myself would not have set me free. Will it dissapointment my love ones? Ruin future plans for me?
So I threw away my letter, and I dried up all my cries, the night I tried to kill myself was not my time to die.
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Re: The Night I Tried To KILL Myself....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:11:04 PM AEST
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This is truly an outstanding write. Definitely one of the best I have read in a long while. It reads so smoothly, and yet is so deep and insightful... wonderful. I love it. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: The Night I Tried To KILL Myself....
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by CrippinBabi513 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:14:28 PM AEST
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| Great job very touching...* Babi |
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Re: The Night I Tried To KILL Myself....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:16:30 PM AEST
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| This was a very good poem, very strong, excellent rhymes, and yes I to have felt this way before. I do believe that people go to hell if they do kill themselves. That is just my belief. |
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Re: The Night I Tried To KILL Myself....
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by b_rand on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 05:25:35 PM AEST
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| the rhyming in this perfect. great flow, grest vocabulary, great points. this is AWESOME. you have talent, stick with it and you'll get through watver you're going through |
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