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Watching myself dead
Contributed by
CrippinBabi513
on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 05:53:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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As I look below me
I see my lifeless flesh
I lay on the concrete
And my body is dead
I can do nothing now
But stare and cry
Why was I chosen
To be the one to die
Im so sorry mama
For I didnt make u proud
I never once listened
And I hung with the rough crowd
Now I know why
Daddy was protective
But my eyes were blinded
I couldnt see his perspective
I dont know how I got here
How I made it to God
I wish I was on earth
But the bullet I couldnt dodge
No one called 911
Everyone jus ran
My heart stopped
And I fell from my stance
I wanted to live the street life
And feel like I was tough
I guess my families love
Just wasnt enough
But now I realize
I really wasnt smart
If I could go back
Id clean up and restart
My friends showed me love
And the told me they cared
But why when I died
No one was there
My soul is set free
I am nothing now
Ive closed the curtain
And taken my final bow
Again Im sorry mama
Im sorry to dad too
Neither of you new it
But I loved both of you
So to all the kids
Who live on the streets
Please go back home
Or you could end up like me
Copyright ©
CrippinBabi513
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2005-03-22 17:53:13]
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Re: Watching myself dead
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:11:37 PM AEST
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Great poem I am very surprised that I am the
first to comment on this. Anyway I liked this
written with a lot of emotion and the ending
put chills up my spine for whatever reason.
Good stuff.
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