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Oh Mother
Contributed by
Sk8ergrl_911
on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 07:17:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Mommy says she's going for awhile,
Mommy says I'll be there soon,
Why do you look so sad Mommy?
You said you were going to a better place.
Don't be sad it's not the last time you'll see my face.
Mommy says it'll all be okay,
Mommy says she loves me as her hand slips away.
Why are you leaving Mommy?
Please don't go away.
The nice man says she might be back soon.
He says she's done some bad things.
But mommy you just said you wanted to leave.
You just said you were going on a midnight stroll.
And there she goes.
Bye bye mommy.
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2005-03-22 19:17:31]
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Re: Oh Mother
(User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:48:07 PM AEST
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an excellent portrayal of the child's thoughts. A very well written piece of poetry. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: Oh Mother
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by Sk8ergrl_911 on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:35:09 PM AEST
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