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The Creator
Contributed by
mia
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:36:56 PM in AEST
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Your the creator of hate
The creator of pain
Not of innocence & helpfulness
I feel the bleeding pain i'm in
I hope you do to
He lies with the death he lives with
Draw those tears back, you don't cry
Fly away & never return
Because your the creator of hurt......
You killed my best friend
I was your partner after
That is so sick
I will never know the truth
Your the only one who can tell
Move on...I have
But yes........the creator of mass distruction
Fly...fly...fly
Copyright ©
mia
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2005-03-22 22:36:56]
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Re: The Creator
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:54:03 PM AEST
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vERY DEEP AND THOUGHT PROVOKING.
HUGGS,
emy |
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Re: The Creator
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 01:41:28 AM AEST
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| Wow. This is quite an impressive abstract poem. The third stanza is so venomous in its simplicity. Its great. Very powerful write. |
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