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good bye mother
Contributed by
hrpuffnstuff
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:04:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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you will not listen to me your daughter
the carrier of your genes, your fruitation
so to him all women's knees part eh?
what am i? your baby? your competition?
wake up mother, he raped your daughter
you will not listen to me your daughter
am i a sacrifice for family? for you?
"keep your mouth shut" is all i hear
well i feel gagged and isolated too.
wake up mother, he killed your daughter
you will not listen to me your daughter
you don't know or care how i feel
siblings worried that it will turn bitter
so im the one left out of the circle
wake up mother,i am also your daughter
you will not listen to me your daughter
i didn't ask for it, i didn't want it
i didn't want you to die either
i didn't want the family to split
wake up mother,i am your baby daughter
you will not listen to me your daughter
am i supposed to listen to you?
"i love you " makes it better?
cuddles makes me scream too
wake up mother,i am no longer your daughter
you will not listen to me your daughter
"ask god's forgiveness for your part"
well excuse me whilst i falter
talk about daggers to the heart
wake up mother, i am no longer your daughter
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Re: good bye mother
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:12:56 AM AEST
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Deep and powerful.. very tragic write...
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Re: good bye mother
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:51:03 AM AEST
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I can feel the hurt...
take care...hrpuffnstuff...cheers!~
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Re: good bye mother
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:11:53 AM AEST
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wow Hayley *hugs* that was so deep and powerful, hope you feel better for getting that off your chest . very good write, expressed deeply
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Re: good bye mother
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:41:43 PM AEST
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Hayley, this is a sad, emotional and heart breaking write. I felt ur pain in ur words and sensed the anguish and the anger that u suffer. Much peace to u dear friend. A true master piece with the essence of sadness attached to it.
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