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a thought or more
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:02:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hours run through the stream
the pain shows faith in me
love hates in a dream
sickness will agree
pick scabs of yesterday
to reveal thick skin and scar
truth is what you pay
in darkness where you are
I'm fading into scene
melting in a cube
keep shape, care what you mean
this life is whats in you
Man is anger whole
Target love to take
Nothing for his soul
But Her love is like a lake.
Swim too deep and drown
Stay too long and freeze
No sand or solid ground
To bring a mind of ease...
wanna catch the sun?
feel the rush of pain?
stroke the canvas one
and let the color stain
yellow for the heart
blue for walls of haze
red for stop and start
the end of crazy days
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In_a_While
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2005-03-23 11:02:59]
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Re: a thought or more
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:15:05 AM AEST
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I liked the poem, which I felt was very well done. I especially liked how love was compared to the depth of a lake.
This was an excellant write. Thanks for sharing, and hope to see more.
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Re: a thought or more
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:14:51 PM AEST
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dep and well expressed poem,
I really liked this one alot, well done to you,keep up the good work
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Re: a thought or more
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by reflections on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 07:08:47 AM AEST
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You are well received. You have a style that's fun to read. The picture you paint with the words you use is an excellent view of your thoughts and emotions. You have a unique ability to express yourself. Keep 'em coming.
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