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White Lies and Purple Alibis
Contributed by
socialburnin
on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:03:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The mix of nightmares and perfume Hangs heavy in your room You take the fun out of cheating And the rest out of sleeping Your lips taste of Nyquil and desire Your skin is smoldering like fire I'll hold you close and whisper a toast To our cascading, intrepid free for all We take what we can get We will see who is best Which one of us comes out on top Fingers grasping, lungs gasping Searching for our uncertain certainties Tell me of your little white lies And Ill hand over my purple alibis Now Im feathered and famished And your jaded and slanted Its done, was it worth what you gave?
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Re: White Lies and Purple Alibis
(User Rating: 1 ) by waos on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:25:01 PM AEST (User
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This was really good... the flow was amazing, your word choice was excellent,
making the poem good to read, and you really put things originally... congratulations
on an awesome job!!
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: White Lies and Purple Alibis
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:58:58 PM AEST (User
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| you did a good job, and i liked the title. Great write. |
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