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ABUSED (PART 1 )
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:30:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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STOP YOUR DRINKING , CAUSE YOUR LOSING YOUR MIND
WHY DO YOU CONTINUE TO HIT ME ALL THE TIME
DO YOU REALLY THINK , I NO LONGER CARE
CAN YOU TELL ME WHAT HAPPEND TO THE THINGS , WE ONCED SHARED
IN MY HEART , I FEEL AS I NO LONGER EXIST , I GET SO TIRED , SOMETIMES I JUST WANNA SLIT MY WRISTS
YOU GO TO THE CLUBS TO DO YOUR THING , WHILE I'M HERE WITH THE KIDS , TRYING TO MAINTAIN
CAN YOU DEAL WITH YOUR TEMPER , OR AT LEAST PLAY IT COOL , YOU KNOW I CAN'T LEAVE THIS RELAITIONSHIP , CAUSE YOU KNOW YOU'LL BEAT ME LIKE A FOOL
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2005-03-23 20:30:35]
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Re: ABUSED (PART 1 )
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:46:55 PM AEST
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I take it... this is a domestic abuse problem? I can relate to abuse... not that kind... but I can relate. I have known someone too... that has been in this situation.
A good write... there is a lot of emotion expressed here.... a lot of fear... a lot of pain and anger.
Good job!
~Donna~ |
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Re: ABUSED (PART 1 )
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 10:38:25 AM AEST
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| I have a mother who's in this vicious cycle, I would wake up to her cries... This poem went straight to the heart. Thank you for sharing it. |
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