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ABUSED ( PART 2 )
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:40:32 PM in AEST
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THE PURE HEARTED IS NOW DEEPLY DEPARTED , WHY DO YOU GIVE HIM THE CHANCE TO FINISH WHAT HE HAD STARTED
THINGS WERE GOOD WHEN YOU HAD YOUR OWN PLACE , BUT NOW THAT YOU LIVE WITH HIM , ALL YOU GET IS HITS TO YOUR FACE
LATE AT NIGHT YOU WORK ALL ALONE , BUT WHAT DREADS YOUR HEART THE MOST , IS THE FACT THAT YOU HAVE TO GO BACK TO YOUR BROKEN HOME
IN HIS EYES BURNS HIS HATE , HOW COULD THIS MAN USE YA'LLS KIDS AS SOME BAIT
YOU HAD FELT ALOT OF HURT , BUT NOW YOU LIVE WITHOUT THE PAIN , I GUESS THATS WHY YOU SENT THAT BULLET THROUGH HIS BRAIN
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2005-03-23 20:40:32]
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Re: ABUSED ( PART 2 )
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:54:48 PM AEST
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WOW! What a powerful finish!It kinda blew me away! (No pun intended Ha Ha!) The whole poem itself...the 2 parts together... just moved up from being good to a great write. Keep writing!
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Re: ABUSED ( PART 2 )
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by bigtig6269 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 11:44:42 PM AEST
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| as sad as it is, I can't blame her. A person can only take so much before they snap. Great poem. Keep em coming |
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Re: ABUSED ( PART 2 )
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 12:19:35 AM AEST
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Thanks for sharing this. Maybe it will help someone along lifes way.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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