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It was'nt Blood!
Contributed by
naveen
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 10:59:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life's to me, in knives
Cutting to me, in slice
It wasn't blood that flowed then
A stream of emotions and feelings
That whimed through
Leaving past a dead soul, a dark hollow
No more groans, no cries
There's no hopes to follow
Naveen Kumar
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naveen
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2005-03-23 22:59:48]
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Re: It was'nt Blood!
(User Rating: 1 )
by PuppyChow on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:23:44 PM AEST
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a little confusing, but who knows a poem
better than its poet? liked the wording though.
should have added more stanzas to make it clearer. altogether, i liked it. |
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