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Demented Soul
Contributed by
xtcslilangel
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:56:53 AM in AEST
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Voices laughing in my head
Screams announcing I should be dead
Silence whispers morbid ideas
My brain shuts down and apathy adheres
No emotion no feeling
No nothing at all
This is what happens when you let yourself fall
I feel my soul creep farther away
I hear my demon derogate it, forcing it astray
Laughter rings throughout my head
Evil visions declare my soul dead
I am now lost, I am now torn to pieces
No emotion no feeling
No nothing at all
This is the feeling I get when I fall
No emotion no healing
No nothing at all
This is what I get for letting myself fall
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Re: Demented Soul
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 10:12:45 AM AEST
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Brilliant. it flows very well and the message is strong.
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Re: Demented Soul
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 11:30:27 AM AEST
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Wow, it just rolls off your tongue so smoothly, right on
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Re: Demented Soul
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by desecratedtears on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:35:52 PM AEST
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