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loving a lie
Contributed by
marly
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:52:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I fall back into your arms, but your not there to catch me
Lacking the strength to hold
Feelings so frail
Touch so cold
Let this pour soul go . . . . . .
Head down no need to cry
This love I've given a lie
Remember my smile,
Laugh when you want to cry
and sing when you think of me
Time will change and feelings will die
In time you'll see . . . . . . . . .
Copyright ©
marly
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2005-03-24 14:52:12]
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Re: loving a lie
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by Troubadour on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 02:56:55 PM AEST
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absolutely astounding, i love this poem.
reminds a bit of robert frost.
keep up the good work, i look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Re: loving a lie
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by ChinaRivera on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 03:24:18 PM AEST
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| This poem is o k. |
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Re: loving a lie
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by Kay-Kay on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 03:25:57 PM AEST
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great write short but a lot is said in it, and i like this style a lot keep up the great work.
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Re: loving a lie
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by electrique_poet on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:24:27 PM AEST
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i like this, you say what you need to and no more, its nice
... in words electrique |
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