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Confused
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:09:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Confused
The temptation
Of you
For me I know is true
...
The reactions
From you
Sometimes turn me blue
...
I don't know
What to do
I'm always confused
...
Defeated
Without a defence
But I love you
...
But I need to know
Do you love me?
...
Is it true
What you say
...
It seems so sureal
I don't want you to turn away
...
Please tell me the truth
Before...My life starts again to fade
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I want you to be with me
...
I want to be with you
...
I want you to love me
...
Like I
Love you
...
But I'm still so sadly
Confused
...
Do you love me
Like I love you?
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2005-03-24 18:09:52]
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Re: Confused
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:25:22 PM AEST
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| hey baby god write I liked it~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Confused
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by kittie30 on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:33:41 PM AEST
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| that was realy a great poem and i can tell theres alot of feeling in there great wrtie! |
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Re: Confused
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 10:59:46 PM AEST
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| lol clark, i think youll get a lot more people than the person you wrote this for to love you, but thats just looking at the comments. doubt, something i always am filled with and i suggest you either believe something fully of disbelieve it fully, because the gray areas offer nothing, because you dont even believe in them...great poem, but not your best. once you clean it up, it will be perfect. |
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