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-Chaotic Angel-
Contributed by
kittie30
on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 08:22:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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-chaotic Angel-
Most people have that shine in the sky, while the people cry,
with angels looking down on them.
BUT MINE
Is a chaotic angel putting me
in that helter skelter state of mind.
I go crazy as dimness is making
me take forgiveness for all the pain
and misery we have caused together.
Because youre one to be reckon with
when it comes to hearts and feelings
of your friends and foes.
As time comes to a halt Im beat to a pulp.
With tears running down my face,
down my arm, and down my legs.
Please take
Me
-Chaotic Angel-
thnx for reading and plz comment
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Re: -Chaotic Angel-
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by MajesticPoet on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:23:36 PM AEST
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I like this write. I could almost put it to an alternative / rock beat and make a song out of it. You should work on it some more and try to turn it into lyrics. Maybe you could find a band that would love to use it. feel free to email me if you want some help with this. you can send me a private message from this site. Great write, keep them up.
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