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More to life than death
Contributed by
sexytexasguy
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Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The world is sad today
God has taken another life away
Everyday somebody dies
And everyday somebody asks why
But you dont realize it till someone close to you is dead
And then all these thoughts run through your head
But all you can do is cry
And wonder why that person as to die
Then you become mad, for that person leaving you all alone
And suddenly the loneyist place becomes your home
Then you wish you could die and be with that loved one that day
And leave this hell and go up to Heaven will you would stay
But then you realize there is something left
And there is more to life then just death
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sexytexasguy
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2002-12-19 05:00:00]
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Re: More to life than death
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by gina on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 07:11:55 AM AEST
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| IMPRESSING |
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Re: More to life than death
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by OreO on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 11:03:09 AM AEST
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Your talent doesnt ever stop does it...geez this is a good write....i enjoyed this one so much and it's so sad....but it's got a good message behind it where it says and t here is m ore to life then just death...that is so true....thanks for sharing this one ..keep em' coming i want to read more of your poetry...
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Re: More to life than death
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 04:30:03 PM AEST
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Great write, TexasGuy....enjoyed it immensely..
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Re: More to life than death
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by JusMeOtay on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 12:29:18 AM AEST
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| Woohoo! Great write there! You've got it going |
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