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AS THE FLAMES DIE DOWN
Contributed by
Freakchild910
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:39:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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As the flames die down
The sun comes up
But darkness still seeks
To intrude our slumber
They scratch the girls
And fight the boys
And break their things
And steal their toys
As the flames die down
the darkness still seeks
They wind up the artists
By showing his work
Before it is finished
He screams so angryily
That his face turns purple
The Darkness is laughing
So badly they choke
And the flames rise
As they all scream
and dissapear
Completely
And no one ever saw
them
ever
ever
again!
Freakchild xxx
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Freakchild910
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2005-03-25 10:39:35]
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Re: AS THE FLAMES DIE DOWN
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 10:34:06 AM AEST
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beautiful, it's truly amazing. kind of dark and mysterious almost...i dunno, it's hardto explain, but i like it
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