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Slash and Burn
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:57:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Don't ask me to explain,
Don't tell me you understand.
This pain is felt by only me,
So don't hold out your hand.
I don't want your sympathy,
I don't crave your attention.
I don't wanna talk about it,
It's better left unmentioned.
I don't care if each slash hurts you,
Or that each cut makes you cringe.
I don't give a damn if it hurts you,
I'm fighting the me within.
I'll slit my wrist and cut my arms,
And bleed until im drained.
The only thing I can control,
Is the stinging, the throbbing, the pain.
I hate myself, I hate my life,
I'd rather to have never lived.
There's nothing I deserve to take,
I don't have anything to give.
I see everyone looking at me,
Their eyes move to the scars.
I feel their stares, I feel them judge me,
I hear them whisper from afar.
The scars are a reminder,
That among all the pain there's a release.
They suffice until I can bleed again,
Killing myself in peace.
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
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2005-03-25 11:57:24]
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Re: Slash and Burn
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by Gimpie on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:06:37 PM AEST
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| Truly an amazing poem....very deeply written and honestly put down. I loved it. You are very talented and can't wait to read more from you :) |
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Re: Slash and Burn
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:49:07 PM AEST
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| I completely agree... i think it's good u can admit it, and especially tat you can express it so beautifully and movingly. at least 4.5 stars |
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Re: Slash and Burn
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:52:19 AM AEST
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| f*** me that rox, well done!!! |
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Re: Slash and Burn
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 11:07:39 PM AEST
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| that was great, the last stanza really stood out and closed the poem nicely. good write . |
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