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Love's Lost and Found
Contributed by
Devlina
on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Confusion. Intrusion. Make it fade
Any other person, on any other day
Looking all mighty, nice things and all
Put up a front with not a gaze at all
In the direction of where they stride over yonder
I really hope that they ponder
Is that her?
Wow has she changed, with Excuse me sir
In a daze
But I am just kidding myself
Why does it matter? Ive got my health!
Really hoping that they stay
Across the street, as far away
As they can, I dont need confrontation
I might just cry of loves incarceration
A heart that they have today
And for the last three years, OH I pray
Can I have another heart?
Free this one? Does it need a new part?
It wasnt a mighty voice
It wasnt even an easy choice
So not thinking, I walked across the street
Taking a chance for us to meet
To see if there are any sparks
Take our conversation to a park?
Thankfully it was the same
On their side too, there was no blame
Starting over from square one
Having intentions to make it in the long run
Copyright ©
Devlina
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2002-12-19 06:20:00]
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Re: Love's Lost and Found
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 09:47:14 AM AEST
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I think you have talent, very well written
keep it up, a fine write |
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Re: Love's Lost and Found
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by OreO on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 11:24:45 AM AEST
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This is definately different, it has a style of it's own ....it's uniquely written and very cleverly worded....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it ...
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Re: Love's Lost and Found
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by spooky on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 10:05:33 PM AEST
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| I'm no stalker,,but well written,,for this is you accept it your no amatuer,,keep believeing in what you write,,especially if its from the heart |
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Re: Love's Lost and Found
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 11:45:27 PM AEST
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wow, you really do have alot of talent, your poems are all great and i look forward to seeing more!
Take Care!
- Beccs |
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