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Pins And Needles
Contributed by
JustxAxDream
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 07:55:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Pins and needles peirce my soul
A dagger is in my heart
Your knife is cutting into my wrist
Then stabbing me in the back
The blood is trickling onto the floor
The blackness is taking over
No good luck charms could save me now
No pennies or 4 leaf clovers
All i feel is the knife in my back
And the dagger in my heart
Please take them out and we can restart
And wash the blood stains from my soul
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2005-03-25 19:55:31]
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Re: Pins And Needles
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:43:36 PM AEST
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wow... just wow. i feel the same way... although i know i will never be strong enough to ever do anything. but in reality suicide is probably the most selfish act you could ever make... just think how many people you are leaving in question and sorrow. It's so sad that so many people think about hurting their friends and family by committing such a selfish inhumane act... and i am one of these people, which only leads me to shame and guilt. But your poem is very well written good job... i'm going to read it again.
lots of luv........ angel |
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