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Knee Deep
Contributed by
JustxAxDream
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:16:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Hello heart breaker my old friend
Youve come back to haunt me once again
I am to weak to fight you off now
Why can I ever win, someway- somehow?
Ill reach in and tear your heart out
I wont be happy until your dead on the floor
The last to cause you the pain youve caused me blinds me
Now shades of red is all I see
I havent smiled for real since Ive met you
Youre always on my mind I just cant forget you
Every blood and tear drop is collected in a puddle at my feet
You wont be happy until Im in it knee deep.
The days of joy seem out of reach
Pleas let my heart have time to heal
Reveal all this pain that I feel to you
This is all that I beseech
I cant remove the blood stains from my wall
At your feet I will fall
I beg you not to hurt me anymore
My heart is throbbing and sore
I havent smiled since Ive met you
Youre always on my mind I just cant forget you
Every blood and tear drop is collected in a puddle at my feet
You wont be happy until Im in it knee deep.
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Re: Knee Deep
(User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:42:54 PM AEST
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"Hello heart breaker my old friend
You’ve come back to haunt me once again
I am to weak to fight you off now
Why can I ever win, someway- somehow?"
This part really stood out to me. Excellent write. Keep 'em coming.
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Re: Knee Deep
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by blue_angel on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 12:46:23 AM AEST
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| i rilly like it... its excellent keep it up! i luv reading yer poems! |
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