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A Glistening Tear
Contributed by
essentially9
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Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:16:27 PM in AEST
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A Glistening Tear
My breathing quickens in pace,
And my heart starts to race.
You slowly take off the linen of lace
With bareness left in its place.
You whisper loving things in my ear
Only loud enough for me to hear.
You are in control of all of my fear
With each drop of a glistening tear.
My body's yours as your hands caress me.
The unfelt pleasure leaves me empty
With the unfilled expectations of need.
Yet, you just leave me lying there to bleed.
I was left lying there to cry wanting to die,
Because my father's love was a lie.
He raped me with the whys
Of why I never deserved to live life,
And nightmares haunt me every night.
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by emystar on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:24:35 PM AEST
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Wow, deep, wide,strong work of art.
I too have had my nitemares but not from my parents.
I can so relate and feel the passion-n-agony.
Huggs, luv, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:58:47 PM AEST
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| wow that is really amazing. I can relate... it's so sad, but very well written. Inspiring, even. I enjoy reading your poetry, it's so real. |
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:20:59 PM AEST
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Very powerful piece of work. My heart aches to light the darkness where those nightmares dwell.
The Voice
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:27:01 PM AEST
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A beautiful if though tragic work of poetic art . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 06:48:04 AM AEST
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oh Jen this is so heart breaking and so sad.
Your talent once again proven with this outstanding written piece of poetry. Sadly I can relate to ur poem alot.
Much peace to u dear friend. A sad, but divine poem.
Take care my friend.
Hugs,
Sue
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 01:29:46 PM AEST
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| this is probably my new favorite poem by you, for some reason it just really got to me and i can't put my finger on why. there was just so much strength and weight in the words, and the 'glistening tear' was a brilliant touch, i just loved this. |
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 01:48:56 PM AEST
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deep and well expressed,
pix xx |
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 05:12:54 PM AEST
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| Deep and beautiful. What's more to say? |
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by white_tiger on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:13:21 AM AEST
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| thats a really great poem...thanx 4 ur inspirational comment on my poem.... |
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by venkat on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 12:51:08 AM AEST
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God, this is heart breaking..certainly you deserve to live your life with contentment..
I am not going talk about out side beauty.
I must say you are very beautiful at heart..
Jenni..I wish you peace and joy :-) venkat |
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Re: A Glistening Tear
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 10:34:36 PM AEST
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My thoughts of this need not be said....you already know I like it
Clark |
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