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Goodbye
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:39:12 PM in AEST
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I wish I could have really known you, for I knew you just a bit
I wish you didnt have to go through all of this
I cant believe that you have gone, my heart will only deny
And when I sit to think about it, all I can do is cry
I know that you may not have known the friendship that we had
It was something that I treasured and it made me oh so glad
But now youve gone away, and I am left here all alone
I feel that someone stole you away, and now Im on my own
Sure, Ive got other friends, but no one can replace
That special thing that we had, that smile on your face
I saw you lie there in the casket, but I could tell, I knew
That person there and the person you were, that definitely wasnt you
I cannot say just how to explain my feelings that I feel
But even though I know youre gone, I dont know how to deal
God has his purpose, he has a plan, and he knows that we are hurt
Yet, even though I know its true, no one can undo this curse
Im glad youre in a better place, in Heaven till the end
God, you take good care of her, she is still my best friend
Marianne, you rest in peace, and I love you all the more
But dont forget that Im still here, heck, what are best friends for?
Youre body may be underground but your spirit is still here
Have a great time up in Heaven, and I will meet you there
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Re: Goodbye
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by thegurl on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:43:02 PM AEST
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| Refreshing.....though sincere it wasn't depressing...it actually made me smile, i've had people i loved die years ago and i still can't write a poem about them that wouldn't depress the rest of the world....excellent. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by JustxAxDream on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 12:02:02 AM AEST
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| Your an awsome writer and thanks for the comment And i know what you mean..Um im also one of those selfish people but you know...Its just a way to deal sometimes...I guess..Well thanks...And Nice job On this peice! Its amazing |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 06:47:51 PM AEST
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A touching poem, indeed. May you find blessings amidst the curse that does exist, and light where you expected to find darkness.
Andrew |
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Re: Goodbye
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by JustxAxDream on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 09:39:12 PM AEST
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Wow very nicley writen I mean its amazing I cant follow it up thought I mean i cant relate only because I Dont beleive in God Or all but very very nicley writen..Nice job!
XoOx - Princess Michelle - xOoX |
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Re: Goodbye
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by theeman on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:37:15 PM AEST
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| A very nice poem.I had a similar incident in life.when i lost my friend.thats when i wrote the parting which was the first poem i ever wrote.anyway a great poem keep it up |
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