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when........
Contributed by
veenu
on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:35:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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some fragrance blow
from the jungle of
memories...................
some love flow from deeps
of your heart to me.........
when i tie your
love in my heart,
when i think of you
while we are apart,
when i will be dying to
hear the beating of your heart...............
when i lie on bed,
you will be dancing in my head,
when sun is hiding with cloud,
when no one hear
when i cry loud.........................................
when all the doors
will be closed,
when my soft love
pulled from my
heart and exposed
and when my love disposed
when from skies i fall down
to the ground..........................................
when i fly in plain leaving the
green mountain.............................
when all my love i cant explain.......................................................................
Copyright ©
veenu
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2005-03-25 23:35:12]
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Re: when........
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by Shadow on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 11:51:15 PM AEST
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So much pain put into this. The words are so tuching. I can relate.
Great poem. |
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Re: when........
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by abhay on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 12:00:18 AM AEST
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offcourse ur memories never die.....................
what ever happened to ur love but ur poem hear to eternity
u live for ever
great poem
may god bless u
abhay |
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