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Cerulean Contemplation
Contributed by
ooniegirl
on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 09:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Blue is the brilliance of the ocean
to a child,
the shade of a worn-down Crayola -
my favourite.
It is the vividness of the eyes
I stare into
before I fall asleep.
How I long for my child
to have those eyes.
Blue is a hue
to be medicated,slept off,
worked through.
It is the tinge
of my first true taste of freedom,
the stain
of a diary intercepted
and cheap adolescent war paint.
It is the flavour of my clouds
and the mood in the room
after a vehement fight.
Blue is the memory
of the jumpsuit I wore
in a childhood snapshot
and the facade I hid behind
at my father's funeral.
It is the complexion of the mountains
which loom
majestic and spirited
on the other side of my window.
Blue is the signal
that the heart has ceased
to beat.
Copyright ©
ooniegirl
... [
2002-12-19 09:40:00]
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Re: Cerulean Contemplation
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 06:33:45 PM AEST
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| I like this memory of your child hood very nicely done! Christina |
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Re: Cerulean Contemplation
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by OreO on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 08:48:57 PM AEST
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Wow all the different ways you used the color blue to mix in with your life, that's beautifully written the way you did that....your talent shines through your poetry thanks for sharing t his one i enjoyed it alot...
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Re: Cerulean Contemplation
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by Aidan on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 07:51:52 PM AEST
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| This is truly excellent. Outstanding creativity, outstanding form and expression. A pleasure to read. |
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