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When You're Gone
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 03:51:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I start to miss you
As soon as you say goodbye
It's because I Iove you
And I cry
When you're gone
I try not to think about it
Me being away from you
You are my anti-depressant
And I need you
My searing song
I hate it when we part
A hurt strong enough to see
You hold my heart
And I'm in misery
When You're gone
Being without you hurts
And I only heal when your here
Without you I only have an empire of dirt
And a headache of fears
And it seems so long
When your gone
I have nothing to live for
I don't seem to belong
And the time drags forever more
...
My love, I await
And my heart can't be wrong
For my heart aches
When you gone
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2005-03-26 03:51:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: When You're Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:56:33 AM AEST (User
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::raised eyebrow:: what the heaven is wrong with the people on this site not commenting on work that deserves it. many people here deserve some handprints left on their rearends =] well clark better sit down, for this lecture. lol. basing your life around one thing or one person can harm a person more than can do good, because as you know once its gone, it brings you into a world that you thought you left behind. of course, even knowing this, i still do it. i hate people, but the ones i do care about, seem to always leave eventually. but so goes life. also making a person a reason to live for, means you dont think yourself is worth enough to live for. about 10 of my poems are about this, and still has not sunk in. i hope all is well eventually. |
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Re: When You're Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:31:41 PM AEST (User
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Well one for one is the thing .yes a sould mate means all for the world.............make sure the eyes tell all.....that is the soul........sit and think but ponder ont he whole,,,,,,,,,, Heart filled and deep write.....seeks , yet has not found....!!!!!
Brew~ |
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