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The Cycle
Contributed by
thespiritx
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Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Death From the depths of Hell. Sibilantly It rose to perform its duty. Lives are lost.
Lives Lived out meaninglessly. Quickly They fade from existence. Sadness is due.
Sadness For the loss of a loved one. Freely The emotion flows from man. Grief will follow.
Grief Tears at the heart and the mind. Arduously Man overcomes his sorrow. Anger is spawned.
Anger Destroys all that love creates. Regrettably Leaving its ghost behind as it departs. Hope springs anew.
Hope Drives men to freedom and happiness. Readily It frees us from our bonds of loss. Desire is born.
Desire Brings about change in one and all. Eventually Life is restored and joy is felt again. Happiness is shown.
Happiness without moderation leads to blindness. Subsequently We grow too blind and we fail, we fall. Depression replaces all.
Depression The ever-present melancholy which obliterates hope. Expeditiously With all thing sacrificed, all that is left is life. Death is here.
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2002-12-19 11:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by fallensilence on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 03:39:25 PM AEST (User
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amazing work! i loved it |
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Re: The Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 10:36:59 AM AEST (User
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Depression couldn't be described any better than this....thanks for sharing this one it's a great write...
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Re: The Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 05:45:59 PM AEST (User
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This is a great write!!!!
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Re: The Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:28:59 AM AEST (User
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excellent poem... i too struggle with depression... but somehow, everyday, make it to the next... very vivid... very real |
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Re: The Cycle
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:15:23 PM AEST (User
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Such a sad this depression is...but you really said what depression actually was... a full range of emotions...a whole cycle of feelings... and i think you did it beautifully... thank you again for sharing
Lindsey |
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