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Antistrophe
Contributed by
LevyMetal
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 05:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There i am bare feet and naked
Feeling tipsy while dancing wasted
Dizzy jolts and its all fun and games again...
Just another friend around a circle table
Call them up and provoke there choice of label
A suited fix fits firmly in a needle
More injections and soon im ill and feeble
Dizzy jolts and its all fun and games...
my momma said "its fine, but stay alert;
Its all cute and funny until somebody gets hurt"
An anorexic protest obsessing in the kitchen
I cook a full course but tastes something missing
The irony of attention is rather amusing
The contrast of your apathy can be confusing
A stab at not caring is very loud and clear
You must follow that drum solo with a short career
Seeing the things that you vomit seem to be organic
I keep in mind you are the neon vibe of my sonnets
My little, dirty, obsessive secret never yielded mercy
But i jab it in and out for the fun of contraversy.
Copyright ©
LevyMetal
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2005-03-26 17:50:14]
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Re: Antistrophe
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by Rikki on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:20:49 PM AEST
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| This title grabbed me, I read it and was almost jonzing. You are a brilliant writer. I can totally relate. |
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Re: Antistrophe
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by Dying_Angel on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 04:39:52 PM AEST
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| *In Awe* |
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Re: Antistrophe
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by Dying_Angel on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 04:40:22 PM AEST
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| *In Awe* |
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