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Orange Blossoms
Contributed by
Rae
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 07:37:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I was sitting alone and I wished you were there with me
Of all people, why you?
Because you are my north, my south, my east, my west.
You are my Christmas breeze,
You are my sad evenings.
You are my truth.
You are my 9 PM.
You are my black car.
You are my full moon, my piercing sunlight.
You are my favorite book.
You are my death.
You are my box of tissues.
You are my open window, and the gap between darkness and light.
You are my restlessness.
You are my blank piece of paper.
You are my newly sharpened pencil.
You are my Tuesday.
You are my 4 PM.
You are my rain cloud.
You are my headache.
You are my stop sign.
You are my flashing red light.
You are my summer breeze.
You are the quiet telephone.
You are the light over there.
You are my alarm clock.
You are my un-replied letter.
You are my wall.
You are the lake.
You are my hill.
You are my loss.
-Rae'05. 9:13PM. 032205
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Rae
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Re: Orange Blossoms
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by Avernus on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:06:01 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. I probably ment something completly different to me than it does to you but that is what good poetry is all about |
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Re: Orange Blossoms
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 11:40:46 PM AEST
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I WAS SITTING A LONE AND WISHED YOU
WERE THERE WITH ME, OF ALL PEOPLE
WHY YOU . . . IF THIS WAS THE ONLY LINE
2 THIS POEM I'D STILL HAVE NO CHOICE
BUT 2 CALL IT A MASTERPEICE NOT TO
MENTION YOUR STYLE OF WRITING . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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