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Holding Your Love
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:13:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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With deepest love you touched my life
You touched my heart and held my hand
You taught me love and spoke in words
That only hearts can understand
But then our world came crashing down
All that seemed strong to dust was turned
I fell from love to deepest hell
In searing pain my hearts heart burned
One minute high in heavens skies
The next in death from bleeding heart
The deepest pain I think Ive found
My soul now mourns that were apart
Yet still it fades
With memories and shades
Of holding your heart
Of holding your love
Teardrops fall from eyes and heart as he turns away for the last time.
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wachumiri
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2005-03-26 20:13:35]
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Re: Holding Your Love
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by Avernus on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:18:50 PM AEST
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| Very well written. Sorry for your loss. I think we've all been there at least once |
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Re: Holding Your Love
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by Archie on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 08:48:48 PM AEST
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| I know how that feels. The heart always hurts when love is lost |
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Re: Holding Your Love
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 07:40:06 PM AEST
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Wow...this poem is so beautiful. I think this is one of the best things that you have written. Sort of out of your style, but lovely nonetheless. I am sorry, and I did love you too. Let God take your pain, and have him assure that you are now following His path for your life. Just close your eyes and let Him lead...you're good at that.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Holding Your Love
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:36:42 PM AEST
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heart wrenching stuff - this poem kept me glued from the first minute
a sad poem but its an inspiring piece of writing! |
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Re: Holding Your Love
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:26:20 PM AEST
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david, this is so beautiful... i hope your feeling better, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Holding Your Love
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by somedaylove on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 12:58:10 PM AEST
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| I feel your sadness as i read this.........keep up the faith............Love will come your way again |
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Re: Holding Your Love
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by anitajames on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:46:23 AM AEST
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| This brings tears to my eyes. Emotional and honest write. |
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Re: Holding Your Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:58:58 PM AEST
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Oh David you brought me to tears with this write. My heart absolutely breaks for u. I'm so sorry for I knew how much u loved her. U shall not be alone my friend. I'm always here 4 u. May ur beautiful heart heal soon.
*heartfelt hugs* to my dear friend,
Sue |
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