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°°°SandMan°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
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Mirror, Mirror on tha wall
i found on earth where beauty falls
i seek no more for true loves kiss
i found it in my Sand Man's lips
Grain of sand.. one of a kind..
True love found, we are not blind..
Desire so strong.. Fairy Tale Romance..
He holds me close.. together we Dance..
I've searched all my life..for True Love's Desire..
It's my Sand Man's heart, and soul i admire..
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-12-19 16:40:00]
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 05:55:14 PM AEST
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| Oreo this is short for you but all the same a really good peice! I liked this Christina |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 07:44:53 PM AEST
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Hey, Oreo I usually don't like lovepoems, but I enjoyed this one. I too searched for True Love's Desire. Keep on posting your poems there all so unique and well written.
- Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 07:51:10 PM AEST
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I like this one. Why is it we always search for the ideals? Iunno, but it happens, and I like this.
YS |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 09:43:15 PM AEST
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| I love this poem OreO. I'm usually not one to read love poetry or to actually write it either...but I enjoyed this one for some reason. I guess it's because it has some elements of mystery behind it since the reader doesn't really know who the Sand Man is. Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by Smooth on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 10:32:27 AM AEST
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I loved this poem, it's extremely well written, and I too like the mysteriousness of the sand man... You are so talented, I look so forward to reading your work... How were you inspired to write this poem? it's a sexy write with cool visuals... thanks for sharing this one Oreo.
Smooth |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by fancyface4898 on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 03:30:59 PM AEST
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| beautiful write. I am so glad I looked at your name to see what you ahve written |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by FireStorm12 on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 04:16:11 PM AEST
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| BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO...very inspirational...makes me want to pull out my pad of paper and start writing another poem. I feel much better being able to post something about one of your poems...you where very nice about mine and I thank you. I truly appreciate this poem...now I think Ill work on another. |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by Lone_er on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 04:27:02 PM AEST
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Like this poem very much OreO.
Innocent and yet compelling
`Russ`
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 12:30:30 AM AEST
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| your work is exceptional i enjoy reading very much...may we all find that perfect love someday |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by gina on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 10:38:38 AM AEST
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i wonder how you find time to comment almost all the poems and write such beautiful ones...gr8 write
check my poem "help me plz " i replied to wat u wrote:)...........GINA |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by Wiccan on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 01:54:00 PM AEST
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It's a shortie but it was very nice. It's very.. smooth..I like this one alot!
~Wiccan~ |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 05:15:17 PM AEST
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Great write, Oreo....simply beautiful....
Jenni |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by princesspurty on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 05:22:00 PM AEST
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| beautiful! and so in tune with the sandman, perfect! |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by Mystery_Girl on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 08:12:24 AM AEST
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| Short but sweet.........Like the song says...Mr Sandman bring a dream, he's the cutest that i've ever seen......And my sandman is to me.....well he isnt really a sandman but...he knows who he is......Great write.....Tanya.. |
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by Panther_1978 on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 12:15:46 AM AEST
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WoW... this is really short for you OreO but really beautiful! Thanks for sharing, write more!!!
Panther |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 12:18:50 AM AEST
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WoW... this is really short for you OreO but really beautiful! Thanks for sharing, write more!!!
Panther |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 09:19:04 PM AEST
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Hi Oreo!
This poem is fabulous! Just great! |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by wordsy on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:17:36 PM AEST
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In dreams there lies, my lovers eyes and my heart does follow after. A very good read.
wordsy. |
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:26:30 PM AEST
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Wow girl..I really loved that. And who did you pay off to get so many reads and comments?? lmao All kidding aside...you deserve each good thing that is said about your writes. You earn it with great poetry such as this one.
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Re: °°°SandMan°°°
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 09:30:52 AM AEST
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| Very good poem. It is always nice to finally find what you've dreamt of. |
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