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Stop...Ju--u-ust Stop
Contributed by
TheForgottenMelody
on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 10:59:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Caught beside a strobe light
It's the only blinking comfort
In this dead room full of people
Who aren't making sense
See the clock; it's midnight
I will wrap up in a blanket
As a means to prove a theory
I exist in peace
I lie in that old space
Where my good friend keeps a clean home
He would preserve it all in plastic
If he thought he could
Another day in this place
I could stand a future visit
Music sounds fantastic
Through the walls of a broken down shack
Copyright ©
TheForgottenMelody
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2005-03-26 22:59:36]
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Re: Stop...Ju--u-ust Stop
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:42:39 PM AEST
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| Hey good write I liked the outlook to your poem..~~Crystal~~ |
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