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White pain
Contributed by
Sensommar
on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:35:21 AM in AEST
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The white pain
questioned me
never my actions
allowed laughter
but never joy
ate me up from within
leaving nothing
not even my selfpity
to protect me
The white pain
reduced me
robbed me
of what was once mine
leaving me
with blank fingertips
I realize
that the road
I will take
will change
and the map
will not be found
this time
Lord,
let your love
shine through me
give me peace
lead me back
to myself again
let me hear the screams
from my hometown
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Sensommar
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Re: White pain
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:59:46 AM AEST
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I'm really enjoying your writes as they show that we're all human and worthy of God's omnipitent luv for all alike.
Keep up the masterpeices as this is a masterpeice too.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
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Re: White pain
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:23:58 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this... finding the last two lines particularly striking. I have a feeling that many might say they understand but that none will know exactly. I will stop short of saying that I can relate to this and will say instead... 'white pain' seemed quite right here.
Well done... keep writing,
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Re: White pain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:48:40 PM AEST
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| This is an interesting and thought provoking write. I enjoyed it immensely. Great work. |
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