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.-.drowning insecurities.-.
Contributed by
guts_n_glitter
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 07:53:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Staring at the ripples of a newly splashed puddle
the rain always hid my tears
It was a substitute for when you kissed them away
Dont leave
Done leave me behind
Its been so long
Youve left me before we started our novel
Left me with no-one to hold
Was questionable if you ever was there
Or maybe it was me who lived in your shadow
The rain cloud is now my sunshine
Drowning insecurities
And hiding me in a water surrounded bubble
Where have you gone?
Where are you going without me?
Please can I have more time
Only huddled with your body can I be safe
I dont care who ends up getting hurt
Im already ripped to shreds by pain
Answer me this
Will it ever happen?
Am I living an empty dream?
I cant feel the rain anymore
Oblivious to anything but you
Come back soon
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Re: .-.drowning insecurities.-.
(User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 09:03:33 AM AEST
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a sad, but very well portrayed piece of poetry.
Well done and thanks for sharing it.
Hugs,
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Re: .-.drowning insecurities.-.
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by reflections on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 10:13:55 AM AEST
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Please can I have more time
What we’ve had is not enough.
Don’t leave
I fear that I can’t be that tough.
The rain cloud is now my sunshine
But, I remember better days.
Am I living an empty dream?
Where I’m the only one who pays?
Where have you gone?
I can’t find you any more.
I don’t care who ends up getting hurt
I’m on this side of the door!
Oblivious to anything but you
Why must I be on my own?
I cant feel the rain anymore
Though it soaks me to the bone.
Its been so long
I’ve lost my way;
Don’t leave me behind
To be tossed away.
come back soon . . .
IT’S YESTERDAY!
Forgive me for taking liberties with your poem. I took selected lines from yours and added a response line to each. The result was my comment as to my interpretation of your poetic statement.
If I have in any way offended you, or any of your regular readers, please notify me and I will request the webmaster to remove my comment, and I submit an apology to all who are offended.
I enjoy reading the written feelings transferred from your heart to your verse.
John
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