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The Formula
Contributed by
sinned
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 07:59:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Before anything
A void of nothing
I knew your name
I saw your face in time
Before I set planets in place
I saw your face
I made the moon and morning star
In history I saw you afar
Each person a different formula
I knew your name,for I know all
I hold the key
You were made for Me
Into you I breathed a soul
Wherever in life I know where you go
You may call Me by a different name
I AM God always the same
You are precious in My sight
I give an angel to watch over you each day and night
In time I call you home
No matter where you roam
I give you no more than you can bare
At your side I AM there
When you come It is I who determin
Your formula I hold and no men
I give all things
I made all beings
I made thunder
I AM called Wonder
In turmoil I give you comfort
I surround you I AM your fort
No one may take your life
I hold you in My light
I give you peace I give you calm
For I hold you in My palm
Sinned
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Re: The Formula
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 08:07:37 AM AEST
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So very ture.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Formula
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 08:59:06 AM AEST
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This is an outstanding poem so inspirational and so uplifting. A true master piece so brillantly written.
Hugs,
Sue |
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Re: The Formula
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by Stoney1 on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 06:22:42 PM AEST
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Your poem has elements of brilliance, yet I also note
areas that are awkward and could stand some polish.
Ugh! Dare I use it; that hated word: revision.
I think the poem deserves that added effort.
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