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Killing Me Softly
Contributed by
sweetolbaby
on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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it's mad peaceful laying in his arms
w/ him whispering in my ear
the pleasure is so overwhelming
as I begin to wipe my tears
In his arms I feel so protected
yes he is my security
cuz being even this close to him
he's kiling me softly
w/ words I neva even knew
that can melt away your pain
but i am always near him
it is he that i claim
staring in each others eyes is murder
but it's pleasure that comes along
holing him oh so close, i think
"now this is where i belong"
his eyes and mines can meet and talk
ain't no need for words to speak
sometimes i feel like i'm dyng
and slowly i close my eyes b/cuz i b/come so weak
cuz when his lips meet my lips
then we just formed a kiss
this kiss melts in your mouth not in your hands just like a Hersheys kiss
he breathes in the words i was going 2 speak
just took my breath away
he's like my druf, my deepest craving
i need him night and day
no need for weed to make me stoned
cuz he's a natural high
how can this person be so good?
i just ask myself why?
they say something that is too good to be true
isn't all that it may seem to be
but i'll ask you this one question
has anyone ever killed you softly?
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2002-12-19 18:00:00]
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Re: Killing Me Softly
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 06:29:18 PM AEST
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| Very beautifully romantic! I liked it! Christina |
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Re: Killing Me Softly
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by Snugglebear on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 01:03:24 AM AEST
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| i LOVED your poem...keep them coming..it was great |
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Re: Killing Me Softly
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by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 11:07:21 AM AEST
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I like the style of writing you have here...and yes someone has killed me softly lol...this was a great write thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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