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contradiction
Contributed by
poetry_punk23
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:45:35 PM in AEST
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So close yet so far away from jumping
Guilt and pain subside in our hearts
Its not going to be okay, we cant take this
Were never going to reach the bottom of the cliff
Failures again no matter what were looked
Down upon, why do we live, why dont we kill
Our selves, we cant, never fully succumbing to anything
Good or evil, we lead these lives
with the hope and expectation of crappy days,
boring filled, exciting lives
yet its our own look, and mind, that keeps us here,
twisted, crule fate, that enevitably we choose for ourselves..
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Re: contradiction
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:58:37 PM AEST
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| Yea, I like it. The message is clear and legible, and the last line sums it up. Life doesn't have to crappy and boring. If you can't find anything positive, then do something negative. (^_^)b |
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