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The Wrong One
Contributed by
lady-quiet-dreamer
on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:52:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The young girl whimpers
as the ropes dig deeper.
Her eyes show her fear
as the men all leer
at the girl caught
and unanimously bought
for the five men gather
to tear her dress to a mear tatter.
Oh falls the hope of one
girl so sorrowful so young.
Her cherry they have taken
but her identity mistaken
for another one so fine
and can they be so blind?
That girl is not the slave
you fools who think their brave
I am the one you want.
She is the lost girl, is she not?
So turn away if you dare
and see the one her cries brought here.
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2005-03-27 17:52:07]
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Re: The Wrong One
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:23:36 PM AEST
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Wow, that was so strong! Especially in the beginning, you can see the girl's terror on her face. Wonderfully written and portrayed, where do you get such great ideas? Please write more!
*~Erin~* |
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