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Love Is Never Worth It In The End
Contributed by
NightOwl
on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 05:58:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness falls
My soul sings
Finally, I can breathe
Alone with my feelings
I am angry at the world
Well, not really...
It feels that way,
But I am only angry because someone hurt me
Staring out at the tiny, winking stars
And the brilliantly white moon
Listening to the rabbits and birds settle in
The blissful silence I long for will come soon
No one else is there
It's just me, and that's how I want it
I need to be alone to think
To think of how it all fits
I suppose everyone gets this way
So longing for love and kindness
Even when someone hurts you
You can't send them any malice
Even though she cause me so much hurt
I still believe
She was my mentor, my guide
I can't just leave
I guess I'm rambling
No one cares anyways
I don't know why I bother writing this down
They all say it's "just a phase"
So I look out my window again
The stars are covered with clouds
I feel the dampness and chill of rain
And the thunder crashes loud
It reflects my mood on this night
How I turned from being so loving and innocent
To bitterness and fear
Because love me she didn't
Don't ever love so trustingly
That you give someone your soul
They can smash it without a thought
And your life will never again be whole
Love is amazing and undescribable
But it is never worth it in the end
And as the thunder crashes and rain pours down
My soulless shell crumples and to another life it transcends.
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NightOwl
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2005-03-27 17:58:48]
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Re: Love Is Never Worth It In The End
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:25:56 PM AEST
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| i love the last two stanzas, for me, they really made the poem. ou started out great and ended great |
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Re: Love Is Never Worth It In The End
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by Ravensfire on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:31:05 PM AEST
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| my 2 cents, beautifully written, evokes much emotion. |
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Re: Love Is Never Worth It In The End
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:40:56 PM AEST
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it is alittle random but it doesn't bother the over all quality of the poem. a very good ending and all around good read
Lea |
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Re: Love Is Never Worth It In The End
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 05:36:47 PM AEST
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| Very well written. I really enjoyed it, especially the last two stanzas. Nice work. Keep it up! :-) |
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Re: Love Is Never Worth It In The End
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:08:49 PM AEST
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| i genuinely think you have a gift within your poem - your words seem to flow with such ease that its a joy to read your poems - i love the way you mix so many styles in your poetry - thge darkness, imagery, animals, nature and love for example a very composed poem! |
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Re: Love Is Never Worth It In The End
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by Azanna on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:50:25 PM AEST
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This is very well written. I can indentify with your words, "Don't ever love so trustingly" For all love's amazements and highs... once it has cruelly flown, it leaves you broken on the ground.
Azanna |
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