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Bloody Roses
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 09:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Out on my doorstep sat four bloody roses Symbolizing the four days youve been gone I open a new door after an old one closes But theres no erasing what you have done I pricked my finger on a sharpened thorn Blood trickling out of the open sore And I rub my eyes so red and so worn The pain is even deeper, hurting even more I cant believe what youve done to me To cut so deep then leave me to die Im drowning now, youve made me bleed And now I have no tears, inside I cry The four bloody roses tightly coil around my heart Until it silently shatters in the night And now that you have torn me apart Are you finally satisfied? A puddle of blood forms in my hands As I grip the roses so firmly in my fists And I know that you will never understand As the blood drips down my palms and to my wrists Carefree I was, to trust you so far ahead I take the pills and take too many doses And now because of you I am dead I thank you for the four bloody roses
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Re: Bloody Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jyssvw on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 09:51:53 PM AEST (User
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good job
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Re: Bloody Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 01:18:47 AM AEST (User
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Sad but written well.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Bloody Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by skadmatrix on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:13:39 AM AEST (User
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vary good, i liked it alot, but sad |
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